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2018-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, teacher! It has been too long time to work after long holidays. Actually, I got up hearing your call in this morning. Haha! Nowadays, I'm interesting about "my language exchange". Do you know about that? This is like a social networking site to exchange their mother language. My friend had improved her English skill after she joined the website. She made many foreign friends. So, It makes me very interesting. And I wonder how do you think about it. Below is homework for today. Thank you! Decide whether you have to use much or many. 1. _many____ cars 2. __much___ music 3. __many___ pictures 4. __many___ flowers 5. __much___ milk 6. __many___ numbers 7. __much___ money 8. __much___ tea 9. __many___ girls 10. _many____ pencils

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I don\'t know that website. So I searched it on the internet.

My Language Exchange is two or more people who speak different languages practicing each other\'s language.

For example, an English speaker who is learning French will do a language exchange with a French speaker who is learning English.

You\'re right! It\'s interesting! How can you join? Will you join the program? I can say that it\'s a good idea to join.

It will also be an opportunity for you to learn other language and meet foreign friends. It\'s also a good way for you to practice your English. ^^

By the way, I corrected your sentences including the punctuation. Overall, you did a great job because you got a perfect score!

Congratulations! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Hi, teacher!

>> Hi Teacher!
It has been too long time to work after long holidays.

>> We didn\'t go to work for few days because we had a long holiday.
Actually, I got up hearing your call in this morning. Haha!

>> Actually, your call woke me up this morning.
Nowadays, I\'m interesting about \"my language exchange\".

>> Nowadays, I\'m interested about \"My Language Exchange\".

Do you know about that?

>> CORRECT

This is like a social networking site to exchange their mother language.

>> This is a social networking site used by people who want to learn and exchange words using their mother tongue.
My friend had improved her English skill after she joined the website. She made many foreign friends.

>> CORRECT

OR >> My friend\'s English skill has improved after subscribing on the website. She met many foreign friends.
So, It makes me very interesting. And I wonder how do you think about it.

>> So, I am interested to join. What do you think about it?
Below is homework for today. Thank you!

>> CORRECT
Decide whether you have to use much or many.
1. _many____ cars

>> CORRECT
 2. __much___ music

>> CORRECT
 3. __many___ pictures

>> CORRECT
 4. __many___ flowers

>> CORRECT
 5. __much___ milk

>> CORRECT
 6. __many___ numbers

>> CORRECT
 7. __much___ money

>> CORRECT
 8. __much___ tea

>> CORRECT
 9. __many___ girls

>> CORRECT
 10. _many____ pencils

>> CORRECT

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