2/20 homework
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I want to recommend the gold hatchet and silver hatchet story for the children.
Because these story is interesting and give thinking time that the true truth.
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Hey there, [이름] [이름]!
Did you know? Cinderella is one of the most popular fairy tales of all time. Its story remains an all-time classic and will remain the same for future generations as well. Cinderella was a young woman who lived with her wicked stepmother and stepsisters.
- Kristine ^^
I want to recommend the gold hatchet and silver hatchet story for the children.
>> I recommend the gold hatchet and silver hatchet story for the children.
Because these story is interesting and give thinking time that the true truth.
Because these story is interesting and give thinking time that the true truth.
>> Because this story captivating and make a real impact on the reality.
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