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I don\'t have a critical duty except for tax because Korea is a democratic country.
However, I believe that we have to have an interest in politics and vote for elections.
When I was younger, I thought politics are not related to my life and just I should live with my work.
But one day, I realized that the politics of Korea are very related to my life and work.
When a president or predominant political party is changed, the welfare system or policy is changed a lot.
Especially, in my cases, sometimes my research budget is tied up to the government for a long time or reduced without my opinion.
Not all of them, but typically, politicians need a vote to take political power.
Occasionally they present a policy they can\'t keep or wrap up as if it\'s great.
It is difficult to distinguish between good and bad politicians.
But, we have to make an effort as much as possible and vote for a reliable person.
It creates or changes our future, and furthermore, the future of Korea.
And it\'s our right.
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-Rachel
I don\'t have a critical duty except for tax because Korea is a democratic country.
>> I don\'t have a very serious duty except to pay taxes because Korea is a democratic country.
However, I believe that we have to have an interest in politics and vote for elections.
However, I believe that we have to have an interest in politics and vote for elections.
>> However, I believe that we have to have an interest in politics and vote for people during elections.
>> However, I believe that we have to have an interest in politics and vote during elections.
When I was younger, I thought politics are not related to my life and just I should live with my work.
When I was younger, I thought politics are not related to my life and just I should live with my work.
>> When I was younger, I thought politics is not related to my life and I should just live and work. (politics is considered singular even though it ends with an s)
>> When I was younger, I thought politics is not related to my life and I should just mind my own business.
But one day, I realized that the politics of Korea are very related to my life and work.
But one day, I realized that the politics of Korea are very related to my life and work.
>> But one day, I realized that the politics of Korea is very much related to my life and work.
When a president or predominant political party is changed, the welfare system or policy is changed a lot.
When a president or predominant political party is changed, the welfare system or policy is changed a lot.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
Especially, in my cases, sometimes my research budget is tied up to the government for a long time or reduced without my opinion.
Especially, in my cases, sometimes my research budget is tied up to the government for a long time or reduced without my opinion.
>> correct
>> Especially, in my cases, sometimes my research budget is tied up to the government for a long time or reduced without my knowledge.
Not all of them, but typically, politicians need a vote to take political power.
Not all of them, but typically, politicians need a vote to take political power.
>> correct
Occasionally they present a policy they can\'t keep or wrap up as if it\'s great.
Occasionally they present a policy they can\'t keep or wrap up as if it\'s great.
>> correct
>> Occasionally they present a great policy they can\'t keep or follow through. (follow though means to complete)
It is difficult to distinguish between good and bad politicians.
It is difficult to distinguish between good and bad politicians.
>> correct
But, we have to make an effort as much as possible and vote for a reliable person.
But, we have to make an effort as much as possible and vote for a reliable person.
>> correct
It creates or changes our future, and furthermore, the future of Korea. And it\'s our right.
It creates or changes our future, and furthermore, the future of Korea. And it\'s our right.
>> correct
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