2-21 homework

2012-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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i think living as working mom is not easy. Until now, most people think that housekeeping is woman’s responsibilities. And raising children is also woman’s responsibilities, they think as well. And most people think that a double income is essential for this society. But working mom is not super woman. we have only 24 hours a day same as man. Doing house chores is for ours not woman's things. And we have to share a work at home. So in my case, my husband always washes the dishes after meal. And he cleans at room with vacuum cleaner every weekend. But this is secret for our parents in law. Maybe it seems that they don’t want to their son to do that. Anyway i'm very worried about my home is a mess after finishing work. How can i clean all….?

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you for sending me your composition. Wow! You\'re a great person. You do a lot of things at work and at home. Keep it up! I congratulate you for that. ^-^ I understand your situation and I feel for you. Tell me more about this during our class. You are amazing in balancing your work and your responsibilites at hoime.Have a great day! See you! Take Care Always! T.Verna i think living as working mom is not easy. >>I think being a working mom is not easy.Until now, most people think that housekeeping is woman’s responsibilities. >>Most people think that doing household chores is a woman\'s responsibilities until now.And raising children is also woman’s responsibilities, they think as well. >>And raising children is also a woman\'s responsibilities that they look into.And most people think that a double income is essential for this society. >>Most of the people think that having two jobs to double your income is essential for the society.But working mom is not super woman. >>But being a working mom is not being a superwoman.we have only 24 hours a day same as man. >>We only have 24 hours a day like a man does.Doing house chores is for ours not woman\'s things. >>Doing household chores is for us and as a woman thing. And we have to share a work at home. >>And awe have to share work at home.So in my case, my husband always washes the dishes after meal. >>Correct >>In my case, my husband always washes the dishes after eating.And he cleans at room with vacuum cleaner every weekend. >>And he uses a vacuum cleaner to clean the room every weekend.But this is secret for our parents in law. >>But this is a secret that my in-laws doesn\'t know. Maybe it seems that they don’t want to their son to do that. >>Correct >>It seems that they don\'t want their son to do the household chores.Anyway i\'m very worried about my home is a mess after finishing work. >>I\'m am so worried because after work my house is a mess. How can i clean all….? >>How can I clean all of those?

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