2. 21 Homework

2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Homework: ** Answer the question below in not less than FIVE sentences. ** Are apps useful to you? How many do you have - and how many do you use regularly? Many apps are very useful to me but the most useful app is map app. I'm not good at finding the way where I go, so I can't imagine the life without map app. It notices where I am and how I can go to the destination to me. Secondly useful app is SNS. Not only I can share my day through sending messages and pictures through SNS with my boyfriend and intimate friends, but also I can do a team project through SNS chat room.

강사 첨삭

Many apps are very useful to me but the most useful app is map app. I\'m not good at finding the way where I go, so I can\'t imagine the life without map app. It notices where I am and how I can go to the destination to me. Secondly useful app is SNS. Not only I can share my day through sending messages and pictures through SNS with my boyfriend and intimate friends, but also I can do a team project through SNS chat room.

Many apps are very useful to me but the most important is the map app/ Google map. I\'m not good at finding directions, so I can\'t imagine my life without this app. It can locate where I am and how I can go to my destination. Second useful app is the SNS. Not only I can share my day through sending messages and pictures to my boyfriend and intimate friends, but I can also do a team project with my classmates/group mates through SNS chat room.

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