2/21 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave an awesomely wonderful thought on the topic. ^ ^ It\'s so nice of you to still consider and think of your family despite that you are already married and should be thinking of you and your husband more. ^ ^

And yes, I guess it\'s everyone\'s dream to have their own house no matter how small or big it is as long as we can say it\'s ours and we can call home. But unfortunately, attaining this dream is quite hard since having your own house costs a lot! ^^ It\'s also my desire to have my own house in the future and I hope it wouldn\'t take that long for me to attain this dream. We wish each other luck! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

If I could get anything, I want to get a big house for our family.

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In Korea, the cost of a house is extremely high compared with the living cost.

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So, many people don\'t have a private house until they become old.

>>So, many people don\'t have their own house until they become old. 
It\'s too sad.

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I want to have a house to get together with family, even my husband, and future child.

>>I want to have a house with my husband and future child and also that I can get together with my family.

If so, I need a big house.

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My parents have three children including me.

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Now, we became adults, I already got married and left home.

>>Now that I\'m already married, I left home. 
My younger brother and sister will get married, and they also will leave the house.

>>Sooner or later my younger siblings will get married and they will also have to leave home.

After then, my parents don\'t need to live in the house.
>>After then, my parents don\'t need to live in a big house.
I think it\'s better to move to a smaller house for saving the living cost.

>>I think it\'s better to move to a smaller house to save for the living cost.
But, my mother worries about the movement to a small house, because we can not stay together anymore.

>>But my mother worries about moving to a smaller house because that would mean we couldn\'t all stay together anymore.
So, if I can, I want to have a big house as a private villa.

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If so, we can meet and gather anytime.

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