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I know it is very difficult to comfort or encourage someone who thinks everything is doomed.
But, I want to say that everything passes by.
I like this wise saying.
The good is a moment and the also bad will be a past.
I think that its meaning is to be modest in success and not frustrated in failure.
Sometimes when I\'m in trouble or the last few minutes of the deadline, I used to imagine myself after the resolution or deadline.
I can imagine that happy and upgraded myself.
In that future, I will appreciate the past because it made me an adult.
We can get any lessons from the failures and it grow up ours.
We meet a lot of difficulties in our life.
Every moment is very hard and feels like the greatest threat ever.
When I solve one crisis, a new crisis is coming.
However, we have a lot of happy moments too.
And we know those are the reason we can live and overcome the crisis.
So, I want to say that do not give up on anything.
It will pass by soon.
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I know it is very difficult to comfort or encourage someone who thinks everything is doomed.
But, I want to say that everything passes by.
But, I want to say that everything passes by.
>> correct
I know it is very difficult to comfort or encourage someone who thinks everything is doomed,
but I want to say that everything passes by. (you can also connect the shorter sentence)
but I want to say that everything passes by. (you can also connect the shorter sentence)
I like this wise saying.
>> correct
The good is a moment and the also bad will be a past.
The good is a moment and the also bad will be a past.
>> Good things will come and bad ones will pass by.
I think that its meaning is to be modest in success and not frustrated in failure.
I think that its meaning is to be modest in success and not frustrated in failure.
>> correct
Sometimes when I\'m in trouble or the last few minutes of the deadline, I used to imagine myself after the resolution or deadline.
Sometimes when I\'m in trouble or the last few minutes of the deadline, I used to imagine myself after the resolution or deadline.
>> Sometimes when I\'m in trouble or trying to beat the last few minutes of a deadline, I used to imagine myself after the resolution or deadline.
I can imagine that happy and upgraded myself.
I can imagine that happy and upgraded myself.
>> I can see picture myself being happy and more mature.
In that future, I will appreciate the past because it made me an adult.
In that future, I will appreciate the past because it made me an adult.
>> correct
We can get any lessons from the failures and it grow up ours.
>> We can learn our lessons from our failures and grow from them.
We meet a lot of difficulties in our life.
We meet a lot of difficulties in our life.
>> correct
Every moment is very hard and feels like the greatest threat ever.
Every moment is very hard and feels like the greatest threat ever.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
When I solve one crisis, a new crisis is coming.
When I solve one crisis, a new crisis is coming.
>> When I solved one crisis, another appears.
>> When it rains, it pours. (It\'s an expression that means the same thing)
However, we have a lot of happy moments too.
However, we have a lot of happy moments too.
>> correct
And we know those are the reasons we can live and overcome the crisis.
And we know those are the reasons we can live and overcome the crisis.
>> correct
So, I want to say that do not give up on anything.
It will pass by soon.
It will pass by soon.
>> correct
>> So, I want to tell the person not give up on anything because it will pass by soon.
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