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I think about the best thing about the camping is nature.
Because the nature has fresh air and beautiful view.
I think about the worst thing about the camping is insects.
Because insects sometime give the disease ours. We must have to bring the medicines.
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Happy hump day, [이름] [이름]!
Camping is an effective way of families spending time together and reconnecting. Camping has several health benefits that include physical exercise, absorption of Vitamin D from sunlight, relaxation, reduced blood pressure, and reduction of mental stress.
- Kristine ^^
I think about the best thing about the camping is a tent.
>> In my opinion, tent is the best thing about camping.
Because the tent is safe from the insect and wind.
Because the tent is safe from the insect and wind.
>> Tent is a protection from the wind and insects.
I think about the worst thing about the camping is some food.
I think about the worst thing about the camping is some food.
>> The worst thing about camping is the food.
Because food is heavy and we can buy when we going to there.
Because food is heavy and we can buy when we going to there.
>> Food is expensive, but we can purchase it when we arrive at the campsite.
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