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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Yena,
Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.
One step at a time.^^
Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^
Have a nice day!!!
T. Jeny
What is happiness for you?
Happiness for me is that I know I always could not be happy and Our life has both happiness and adversity.
>>I always know that happiness is not being happy all the time because our life has both happiness and adversity.
Usually, People hope for happiness. But Only seeking happiness is dangerous.
>> Usually, People hope for happiness. But seeking only for happiness is dangerous.
When we have trouble in life, he or she is more frustrated.
>>correct
Thus Happiness for me is to accept my life that is good or bad.
>>Thus Happiness for me is to accept the good and bad things about life.
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