2.22 homework<Why do you want to learn English>
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강사 첨삭
Hi Choi!
Thank you for your interest in learning the English language. I hope that I can help you improve your skills so you can achieve your goals in life.^^
See you in our class. Have a good day!
~Kelly^^
Because I want to use English at work and traveling.
>> Because I want to use English at work and when traveling.
I yet decide what I do at work after I graduate in University.
>> I have not decided where I want to work after I graduate from the university.
And I don\'t know what I want.
>> Correct.
But If I will be good at English, I could get a choice a lot at work.
>> But if I will be good at speaking English, I can have more job opportunities.
So I hope that I\'ll speak English well.
>> Correct.
And I want to find what I like by studying and traveling.
>> And I want to discover what I like by studying and traveling.
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