2.23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! I came back to our class again. I am really excited because I can learn English with you again. Let's try to enjoy our class more than before. I will do try to it with joy.
Tell me about a positive experience with learning English.
When I went on a family trip in Keongjoo last long holiday, I happened to see a few foreigner there. They were enjoying some playing games together. I had greeting and talked with them natually. I think that it was a kind of positive experience with learning English.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Welcome back to Power English! I am also happy to have you in my class again. You are right. Let\'s enjoy our classes and have fun while learning English. See you!^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
I came back to our class again.
>> I came back again for our class.
I am really excited because I can learn English with you again.
>> Correct.
Let\'s try to enjoy our class more than before.
>> Correct.
I will do try to it with joy.>> I will try to do it with joy.Tell me about a positive experience with learning English.When I went on a family trip in Keongjoo last long holiday, I happened to see a few foreigner there.
>> When I went on a family trip in Keongjoo last long holiday, I happened to see a few foreigners there.
They were enjoying some playing games together.
>>They enjoyed playing some games together.
I had greeting and talked with them natually.
>> I greeted them and talked with them naturally.
I think that it was a kind of positive experience with learning English.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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