2/23 homework

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks again for accomplishing your homework.

I hope you\'re having a day there. See you on Monday.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

[Some universities offer online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students?]

Online courses for students in university is negative development.

>>> Online courses in universities is a negative development for students.
Basically, the online courses system have a lot of advantage. 

>>> Basically, the online courses system has a lot of advantages.
We can repeat until understand perfectly and control the time by ourselves. 

>>> We can repeat it until we perfectly understand and we are in control the time ourselves.
However, the problem is person\'s laziness.

>>> Correct!
This is not only problem for students, adults are also same. 

>>> This is not only a problem for students, but also for adults.
Every people likes free and everyone want to play without work. 

>>> Everyone likes to be free and play without working.
So, we make the systems and rules in the society by ourselves to live happy everyone.

>>> So, we make the systems and rules in the society by ourselves for everybody to live happily.
I remember when I was students, I registered many online courses after private academy to complement study.

>>> I remember when I was a student, I registered in many online courses after my private academy classes.
However, I failed for finishing courses well.

>>> However, I failed to finish the courses well.
At the most night, I postponed the plan because I was tired. 

>>> Most of the time, I postponed the plan because I was tired.
This situation is same to adult for studying English on online alone.

>>> This situation is same for some adults who are studying English online alone.
Therefore, This is why I am doing Phone English with teacher on every morning ^^.

>>> This is why I am doing phone English with a teacher every morning.