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Hello Yena,
Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.
One step at a time.^^
Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^
Have a mice day!!!
T. Jeny
What are the qualities or characteristics that every leader should have?
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I think that every leader which should have qualities or characteristics is Three.
>>I think every leader should have the following 3 qualities and characteristics.
First, Every leader should have a charisma.
>>First, every leader should have charisma.
There are various types of charisma.
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Whichever charisma, People tend to follow and trust leader who has charisma.
>>People tend to follow and trust a leader who has charisma.
Second, Every leader should have a accurate judgement because leader have a lot of things to decide.
>>Second, every leader should have an accurate judgement because he will make a lot of decision making.
Leader ought to take a judgement for the whole of group.
>> Leader ought to take judgement for the whole group.
Third, Every leader should have communication ability.
>>Third, every leader should a good communication ability.
Because Mutual intelligibility improves group\'s qualities.
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that is to say, Between Group member and leader, there should be comfortable communication.
>>There should be a comfortable communication between the group\'s leader and the members.
Thank you for your commend and encouragement Jenny!
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It makes me confident,^^ Thank you!
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