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2018-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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What are the qualities or characteristics that every leader should have? I think that every leader which should have qualities or characteristics is Three. First, Every leader should have a charisma. There are various types of charisma. Whichever charisma, People tend to follow and trust leader who has charisma. Second, Every leader should have a accurate judgement because leader have a lot of things to decide. Leader ought to take a judgement for the whole of group. Third, Every leader should have communication ability. Because Mutual intelligibility improves group's qualities. that is to say, Between Group member and leader, there should be comfortable communication. Thank you for your commend and encouragement Jenny! It makes me confident,^^ Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello  Yena,

Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.

One step at a time.^^

Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^

Have a mice day!!!

T. Jeny

   


What are the qualities or characteristics that every leader should have?
>>correct
I think that every leader which should have qualities or characteristics is Three.
>>I think every leader should have the following 3 qualities and characteristics.
First, Every leader should have a charisma.

>>First, every leader should have charisma.

There are various types of charisma.

>>correct

 Whichever charisma, People tend to follow and trust leader who has charisma.  
>>People tend to follow and trust  a leader who has charisma.  
Second, Every leader should have a accurate judgement because leader have a lot of things to decide.

>>Second, every leader should have an accurate judgement because he will make a lot of decision making.

 Leader ought to take a judgement for the whole of group.
>> Leader ought to take judgement for the whole group. 
Third, Every leader should have communication ability.

>>Third, every leader should a good communication ability.

Because Mutual intelligibility improves group\'s qualities.

>>correct

that is to say, Between Group member and leader, there should be comfortable communication.
>>There should be a comfortable communication between the group\'s leader and the members.
Thank you for your commend and encouragement Jenny!

>>correct
 It makes me confident,^^ Thank you!

>>correct

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