2. 23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
When I was 22 years old, I was a student of Nurcing University. I thought about \"What\'s my life goal?\", \"Why do I live?\" everyday. Most of my classmates don\'t seem to think deeply like me. I envied them because I always think so deeply and it makes me not happy. I wanted to be an elementary school teacher. In that time, I thought I can be happy if I become an elementary school teacher and love my students. So I had a goal to enter the Education University and became a studnet of Education University. That goal which I had when I was 22 years old changed my future life entirely. Thesedays, my goal is \"how I can be a good teacher.\".
When I was 22 years old, I was a student of Nursing University. I always thought of \"What\'s my life goal?\", \"why do I live?\" \"what is my purpose?\". Most of my classmates don\'t seem to think deeply like me, I envied them because I always over think and it makes me unhappy. I wanted to be an elementary school teacher, at that time, I thought I can be happy if I become a teacher and love my students. So I had a goal to enter the Education University and became a student there. The goal I had when I was 22 years old changed my future entirely. These days, my goal is \"how to become a good teacher\" in the future.
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