2-23th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are the wisest around our. The wise or genius is everywhere. I think cleverness or wiseness are a inherent characteristics. But we are human beings, and we learn and study something. As a result, we get more wiser and more clever than previous our. I think the education is important to humans. Even if a man is wise, if he don't learn from others or he don't get a change to be educated, he would be normal. And there is another, it is wiseness. I think an well-known about something and wiseness are different. Though we become a well-known about everything, it is not cleverness or wiseness. And also, even if you are inherently wise or clever, if you don't polish your ability, you would be normal. Therefore, I think the important thing is the education no matter what he or she is wise or normal. Nowadays, there are many different studies and it's very dynamic. If you don't steadily follow them, it's difficult to catch them at once. Therefore, we always have to get an awareness.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for doing your homework.
I enjoyed reading your opinion.
In addition to that, you\'ve created good sentences and your answers are well thought of.
Good job!
I agree with you when you said being wise and well-informed are two different things.
Being well-informed means you know a lot of things.
On the other hand, being wise means being able to use the information you know to come up with something good.
It\'s the application of the information that you know.
For example, a well-informed person knows that the sun produces energy.
A wise person, finds a way to store the energy from the sun in order to use it.
Being wise is using and applying the knowledge that you know for a greater purpose.
This is my opinion regarding this matter.
I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again on Thursday. ^^
~Teacher C[이름] :)
There are the wisest around our.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: There are wise people around us.
The wise or genius is everywhere.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Wise or genius people are everywhere.
I think cleverness or wiseness are a inherent characteristics.
>> I think cleverness or wiseness is an inherent characteristic.
But we are human beings, and we learn and study something.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But we are human beings, that\'s why we have to learn and study things.
As a result, we get more wiser and more clever than previous our.
>> As a result, we get more wise and more clever.
I think the education is important to humans.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think education plays an important role in our lives.
Even if a man is wise, if he don\'t learn from others or he don\'t get a change to be educated, he would be normal.
>> Even if a man is wise, if he doesn\'t learn from others or he doesn\'t change to be educated, he would be an ordinary person.
And there is another, it is wiseness.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Another thing is about wiseness.
I think an well-known about something and wiseness are different.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think knowing a lot about something and wiseness are different.
Though we become a well-known about everything, it is not cleverness or wiseness.
>> Though we know well about everything, it is not cleverness or wiseness.
And also, even if you are inherently wise or clever, if you don\'t polish your ability, you would be normal.
>> And also, even if you are inherently wise or clever, if you don\'t polish your ability, you would be ordinary.
Therefore, I think the important thing is the education no matter what he or she is wise or normal.
>> Therefore, I think the important thing is the education no matter how wise or ordinary he or she is.
Nowadays, there are many different studies and it\'s very dynamic.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Nowadays, there are a lot of different studies and it\'s very dynamic.
If you don\'t steadily follow them, it\'s difficult to catch them at once.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you are not diligent enough to study them, you will have a hard time in understanding them.
Therefore, we always have to get an awareness.
>> Therefore, we always have to be aware.
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