2.24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Are you spending your time well now ? It's already spring in Changwon. It's a very nice day to go out and to play golf. ㅋㅋ
Do you think we should all donate some of our salary to charity?
Yes. I totally think so. It is a pleasure to dodate someone. Nobody knows the joy of donating. Many people don't know why they should all donate to charity. We can feel more happy by doing that. I think that we should live with helping ourselves anytime,anywhere.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. It is always good to help others. I am not surprised that you like donating to charities because you are really a good person. Keep up the good work.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Are you spending your time well now ? It\'s already spring in Changwon.
>> Correct.
It\'s a very nice day to go out and to play golf. ㅋㅋ>> It\'s a very nice day to go out and play golf.Do you think we should all donate some of our salary to charity?Yes. I totally think so.
>> Correct.
It is a pleasure to dodate someone.
>> It is my pleasure to donate to a charity.
Nobody knows the joy of donating.
>> Correct.
Many people don\'t know why they should all donate to charity.
>> Correct.
We can feel more happy by doing that.
>> Correct.
I think that we should live with helping ourselves anytime,anywhere.
>> I think we should live by helping others anytime, and anywhere.
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