2.24 Homework

2015-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Are you spending your time well now ? It's already spring in Changwon. It's a very nice day to go out and to play golf. ㅋㅋ Do you think we should all donate some of our salary to charity? Yes. I totally think so. It is a pleasure to dodate someone. Nobody knows the joy of donating. Many people don't know why they should all donate to charity. We can feel more happy by doing that. I think that we should live with helping ourselves anytime,anywhere.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. It is always good to help others. I am not surprised that you like donating to charities because you are really a good person. Keep up the good work.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Are you spending your time well now ? It\'s already spring in Changwon. >> Correct. It\'s a very nice day to go out and to play golf. ㅋㅋ>> It\'s a very nice day to go out and play golf.Do you think we should all donate some of our salary to charity?Yes. I totally think so. >> Correct. It is a pleasure to dodate someone. >> It is my pleasure to donate to a charity. Nobody knows the joy of donating. >> Correct. Many people don\'t know why they should all donate to charity. >> Correct. We can feel more happy by doing that. >> Correct. I think that we should live with helping ourselves anytime,anywhere. >> I think we should live by helping others anytime, and anywhere.

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