2/24 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I can understand the people who discriminate Chinese citizens for spreading the corona virus in our country.
However, I think we should not discriminate them.
It is not different from racial discrimination.
That situation can be ours, and it\'s actually happening now.
Many countries discriminate Korean travellers.
They refuse immigration of Korean or isolate and examine for a long time.
I understand the severity of the situation, but all countries should be careful with the discrimination of the country.
It can affect the national relationship.
It is not a problem that can be solved or prevented only by avoiding Chinese.
We should change our minds.
People not to make unnecessary trips and mage and personal health, not discrimination of others, even it is not Chinese.
We have to know the target of discrimination can be us anytime.
Under any circumstances, the discrimination for anything is no good.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
What can I say, you managed to squeeze in doing your homework even if you are preparing for a big meeting today:) That\'s the spirit!
-Rachel
I can understand the people who discriminate Chinese citizens for spreading the corona virus in our country. However, I think we should not discriminate them.
>> correct
It is not different from racial discrimination.
It is not different from racial discrimination.
>> correct
It is not different from racial discrimination or any form of it. That situation can be ours, and it\'s actually happening now.
>> That situation can be us, and it\'s actually happening now.
Many countries discriminate Korean travelers.
Many countries discriminate Korean travelers.
>> correct
They refuse immigration of Korean or isolate and examine for a long time.
They refuse immigration of Korean or isolate and examine for a long time.
>> People in the immigration refuse to allow Koreans to enter another country or they examine them for a long time.
I understand the severity of the situation, but all countries should be careful with the discrimination of the country.
I understand the severity of the situation, but all countries should be careful with the discrimination of the country.
>> I understand the severity of the situation, but all countries should be careful with their treatment of foreigners.
>> I understand the severity of the situation, but all countries should be careful not to discriminate foreigners.
It can affect the national relationship.
It can affect the national relationship.
>> It can affect international relationship.
It is not a problem that can be solved or prevented only by avoiding Chinese. We should change our minds.
It is not a problem that can be solved or prevented only by avoiding Chinese. We should change our minds.
>> correct
People not to make unnecessary trips and mage and personal health, not discrimination of others, even it is not Chinese.
>> People should not make unnecessary trips, manage their personal health and not discriminate others even the non-Chinese citizens.
We have to know the target of discrimination can be us anytime.
We have to know the target of discrimination can be us anytime.
>> We have to understand that the target of discrimination can be us any time.
Under any circumstances, the discrimination for anything is no good.
Under any circumstances, the discrimination for anything is no good.
>> Under any circumstances, the discrimination for anyone is not good.
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