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2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. a good way to 2. improve my mood 3. latest trend 4. unable to stop 5. annoyed 1. Thank you for the suggestion. I will give it a serious consideration. This is a good way to review. 2. Whenever i go jogging at the park, i can improve my mood while enjoying a breathtakeing scenery and breathing clear air. This is a best way to relieve stress and refreshed mentally. 3. I am gonna go with the cheese burger according to the latest trend in menu. It is a best one. 4. I planned on having a barbeque on terrace but rain suddenly started to pour. How can this happen to me! It unable to stop me from having fun ! 5. I started complaining about how much smokers who used to smoke in front of my apartment entrance annoy me.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean


1. a good way to
2. improve my mood
3. latest trend
4. unable to stop
5. annoyed

1. Thank you for the suggestion.

>> correct

I will give it a serious consideration. 

>> or:  I will give it a serious thought.
 This is a good way to review.

>> correct

 2. Whenever i go jogging at the park, i can improve my mood while enjoying a breathtakeing scenery and breathing clear air.

>> or: Every time I go jogging in the park, my mood can improve while enjoying the breathtaking scenery and breathing clean air.


 This is a best way to relieve stress and refreshed mentally. 

>> This is the best way to relieve stress and be refreshed mentally. 


 3. I am gonna go with the cheese burger according to the latest trend in menu. It is a best one.
>> I\'ll go with your bestseller, cheeseburger. I heard it\'s the best one on the menu.


 4. I planned on having a barbeque on terrace but rain suddenly started to pour. How can this happen to me! It unable to stop me from having fun !

>> I planned on having a barbeque on the terrace but rain suddenly started to pour. How can this happen to me?! This will not stop me from having fun!

 5. I started complaining about how much smokers who used to smoke in front of my apartment entrance annoy me.

>> I started complaining about how much smokers who used to smoke in front of my apartment  annoy me.

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