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1. a good way to
2. improve my mood
3. latest trend
4. unable to stop
5. annoyed
1. Thank you for the suggestion.
>> correct
I will give it a serious consideration.
>> or: I will give it a serious thought.
This is a good way to review.
>> correct
2. Whenever i go jogging at the park, i can improve my mood while enjoying a breathtakeing scenery and breathing clear air.
>> or: Every time I go jogging in the park, my mood can improve while enjoying the breathtaking scenery and breathing clean air.
This is a best way to relieve stress and refreshed mentally.
>> This is the best way to relieve stress and be refreshed mentally.
3. I am gonna go with the cheese burger according to the latest trend in menu. It is a best one.
>> I\'ll go with your bestseller, cheeseburger. I heard it\'s the best one on the menu.
4. I planned on having a barbeque on terrace but rain suddenly started to pour. How can this happen to me! It unable to stop me from having fun !
>> I planned on having a barbeque on the terrace but rain suddenly started to pour. How can this happen to me?! This will not stop me from having fun!
5. I started complaining about how much smokers who used to smoke in front of my apartment entrance annoy me.
>> I started complaining about how much smokers who used to smoke in front of my apartment annoy me.
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