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Hi [이름]! Thank you for your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thanks for your thoughts on this one. You are correct! We would really feel good if foreigners who come to visit our countries would be polite and would try hard to express themselves in our own language. That means they are actually showing respect and interests in our country. It\'s a very good gesture indeed! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I am in another country, I try to say in local Language for some simple sentences such as \'Thanks\', \'Sorry\', and \'Excuse me\'.
>>When I am in another country, I try to say simple phrases like \"Thanks\", \"Sorry\" and \"Excuse me\" in their language.
I think it\'s a very good manner.
>>Correct OR
>>I think it\'s a very good gesture.
If I try to say in the local language, the natives want to help me and the atmosphere is very warm, even they can not fully understand me.
>>When I try to say things in their local language, even if they can not fully understand me, the natives would want to help me and the atmosphere is very warm.
On the contrary, when I helped a foreigner, I was happy to hear \'Thanks\' in Korean.
>>On the other hand, when I helped a foreigner and said \"thank you\" to me in my language; I felt happy.
When we go to a foreign country, we are stranger in the natives.
>>When we go to a foreign country, we are strangers to the people living there.
Some people have interests to me, but the others keep an eye out from me.
>>Some people would have interest on me, but others would rather ignore or not mind me.
It is more serious in a country or city where there are a few foreigners.
>>Correct
At that time, the local greeting is a good way to relax the relationship.
>>Being in that situation; it\'s good to greet them in their own language to have a relaxing vibe or feel.
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