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It is a very difficult thing.
If I will make a movie about myself, it will be a documentary.
A few months ago, I watched a that kind of movie for one family who undergoes IMF period.
In the movie, the age of parents and daughter is very close to my family, so I can empathize with them and their life fully.
I think my life is very ordinary at least until now.
Although I have been solved small problems, there were no serious problems such as illness or the death of lovers.
It means quite many people\'s life is like me.
So, I think they can understand and empathize with my documentary of life.
I want to five a name to \'a very ordinary life\' in the earth.
And I want to say that we live by solving small tasks and problems but we learn and enjoy life from those unexpected things.
The life both ordinary and extraordinary people are very unstable.
However, we just believe that every life has meaning in its own way.
I want to give people hope and love.
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Hi [이름],
It sure is a difficult question, but I am glad you still answered it. If you asked me, I would have to think hard about it. ^ ^
-Rachel
If I will make a movie about myself, it will be a documentary.
>> correct
A few months ago, I watched a that kind of movie for one family who undergoes IMF period.
A few months ago, I watched a that kind of movie for one family who undergoes IMF period.
>> A few months ago, I watched a documentary about a family who suffered during the economic recession in 1997.
In the movie, the age of parents and daughter is very close to my family, so I can empathize with them and their life fully.
>> In the movie, the age of the parents and the daughter is similar to me and my family\'s, so I can empathize with them and their life fully.
I think my life is very ordinary at least until now.
I think my life is very ordinary at least until now.
>> correct
Although I have been solved small problems, there were no serious problems such as illness or the death of lovers.
Although I have been solved small problems, there were no serious problems such as illness or the death of lovers.
>> Although I have solved small problems, there were no serious problems such as illness or the death of loved ones.
It means quite many people\'s life is like me.
It means quite many people\'s life is like me.
>> It means, most people have the same life as I do.
So, I think they can understand and empathize with my documentary of life.
So, I think they can understand and empathize with my documentary of life.
>> correct
>> So I think they can easily relate to my documentary if they watch it.
I want to five a name to \'a very ordinary life\' in the earth.
I want to five a name to \'a very ordinary life\' in the earth.
>> I want my documentary to be titled: \" A Very Ordinary Life on Earth\".
And I want to say that we live by solving small tasks and problems but we learn and enjoy life from those unexpected things.
And I want to say that we live by solving small tasks and problems but we learn and enjoy life from those unexpected things.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
The life both ordinary and extraordinary people are very unstable.
>> The life of both the ordinary and affluent people is very unstable.
However, we just believe that every life has meaning in its own way.
However, we just believe that every life has meaning in its own way.
>> correct (great sentence)
I want to give people hope and love.
>> correct
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