2-25th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think the true learning occurs when we experienced a failure. When I work on a project, there are always many obstacles to hinder our way. Nobody predicts the easy way. It also came from our experiences and it was also the result of the past works. If we successfully finished the project without any errors, we would not look into it anymore. Because we already succeeded. However, if there were many trials and errors in working steps, after finishing the project, we would look into it. It's because we don't want to repeatedly commit the errors. And then we will learn something from this behavior. If we don't commit any error and any failure, maybe we are a god. But we are not the god, therefore we will commit errors and we will overcome the obstacles. Some goods came from the failure. For example, the PostIt we always use is originally the failure. A developer did want to make a very strong paste. But he fail to make it. Someday, he found out the paste would become another goods.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
Good job for today. Your sentences are once again nice and I\'m happy about it.
I agree with you when you said true learning happens when we experience failures, mistakes and disappointments.
Only a few people truly realize that.
I think this problem has taken root in our own school systems.
In schools, we are taught not to make any mistakes.
Those students who make mistakes and fail a lot are not considered as intelligent or bright.
But I discovered that life does not work that way.
Many people don\'t succeed in life because they think that it\'s not okay to fail or make mistakes.
They get stuck because they\'re too afraid of what others might think of them.
In reality, those who fail and make mistakes are usually the ones with more experiences and lessons to learn.
I hope you have a great Friday and weekend.
See you on Tuesday.
Take care! ^^
~Teacher C[이름] :)
Yes, I think the true learning occurs when we experienced a failure.
>> Yes, I think true learning occurs when we experience failure.
When I work on a project, there are always many obstacles to hinder our way.
>> When I work on a project, there are always many obstacles that hinder our way.
OR >> When I work on a project, there are always many obstacles that stop us from moving forward.
Nobody predicts the easy way.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Nobody could predict the easy way.
OR >> Nobody knows the easy way.
It also came from our experiences and it was also the result of the past works.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The lessons are also from our own experiences and past events.
If we successfully finished the project without any errors, we would not look into it anymore.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If a project is successfully accomplished and has no errors, we would not look into it anymore.
Because we already succeeded.
>> It\'s because we already succeeded.
However, if there were many trials and errors in working steps, after finishing the project, we would look into it.
>> However, if there were many trials and errors in the working steps, after finishing the project, we would look into it.
It\'s because we don\'t want to repeatedly commit the errors.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s because we don\'t want to commit the same mistakes.
And then we will learn something from this behavior.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After that, we would learn something from doing it.
If we don\'t commit any error and any failure, maybe we are a god.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If we don\'t make any error and experience any failure, then we are probably perfect like God.
But we are not the god, therefore we will commit errors and we will overcome the obstacles.
>> But we are not God. Therefore, we will commit errors and we have to overcome the obstacles.
Some goods came from the failure.
>> Some good things came from failure.
For example, the PostIt we always use is originally the failure.
>> For example, the Post It we always use was originally a failure.
A developer did want to make a very strong paste.
>> It\'s developer wanted to make a very strong paste.
But he fail to make it.
>> But he failed to make it.
Someday, he found out the paste would become another goods.
>> One day, he found out that the paste would become another form of goods.
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