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Hello [이름]! Thanks for sharing your answers. That\'s a good answer.
My former supervisor also advised me set my priorities if I have a lot of things to accomplish.
It\'s \"priorities first\" she said. See you on Friday again! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
Q1: If you have a lot of things to get done in one week, how do you manage?
It is very important.
>> CORRECT
When I have a lot of things at the same time, I will have to do in priority orders.
>> If I have a lot of things to do at the same time, I have to prioritize things first.
Actually, I often experience these situation.
>> Actually, I often experience this situation.
As a analysis researcher about some application, many customers request to me to do theirs.
>> As an analysis researcher, many customers ask me to do theirs.
Most of the customers say that they are urgent!
>> Most of the customers insist that they are urgent!
But I can do step by step can\'t do at the same time.
>> I can do it slowly but surely but I can\'t do it simultaneously.
So, I have to do set the priority about the tasks.
>> So I have to set my priorities or the things that I need to do first.
Q2: What advice would you give someone who is very busy?
I advice to someone who is very busy that you have to do in priority orders.
>> To someone who is very busy, I will advice him/her to set priorities.
The priority depends on their job.
>> Those things depend upon the job that they have.
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