2.26 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It was a very nice class today and I enjoyed myself to the full on interaction with you in our class today. I am looking forward to our next class. Thank you!
Where do you prefer to live, in a big city or in a small town?
As may you know, I prefer to live in a small town. I like a rural life because I don't like complexity of big city in its traffic congestions, murky air and hardhearted people. On the other hand, we may enjoy ourselves with composure and generous neighbor's atmosphere in a small town.I only like that.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]^^
I am happy to know that you really had fun in our class today. I also enjoyed it very much. I am also looking forward to having classes with you again. See you!^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
It was a very nice class today and I enjoyed myself to the full on interaction with you in our class today.
>> Our class this morning was very nice and I enjoyed our interaction to the fullest.
I am looking forward to our next class. Thank you!>> Correct.Where do you prefer to live, in a big city or in a small town?As may you know, I prefer to live in a small town.
>> Correct.
I like a rural life because I don\'t like complexity of big city in its traffic congestions, murky air and hardhearted people.
>> I prefer the rural life because I don\'t like the complexities in a big city like traffic congestions, murky air and hardhearted people.
On the other hand, we may enjoy ourselves with composure and generous neighbor\'s atmosphere in a small town.
>> On the other hand, we may enjoy with composure the atmosphere of having generous neighbors in a small town.I only like that.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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