2.26 Homework

2015-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It was a very nice class today and I enjoyed myself to the full on interaction with you in our class today. I am looking forward to our next class. Thank you! Where do you prefer to live, in a big city or in a small town? As may you know, I prefer to live in a small town. I like a rural life because I don't like complexity of big city in its traffic congestions, murky air and hardhearted people. On the other hand, we may enjoy ourselves with composure and generous neighbor's atmosphere in a small town.I only like that. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]^^ I am happy to know that you really had fun in our class today. I also enjoyed it very much. I am also looking forward to having classes with you again. See you!^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. It was a very nice class today and I enjoyed myself to the full on interaction with you in our class today. >> Our class this morning was very nice and I enjoyed our interaction to the fullest. I am looking forward to our next class. Thank you!>> Correct.Where do you prefer to live, in a big city or in a small town?As may you know, I prefer to live in a small town. >> Correct. I like a rural life because I don\'t like complexity of big city in its traffic congestions, murky air and hardhearted people. >> I prefer the rural life because I don\'t like the complexities in a big city like traffic congestions, murky air and hardhearted people. On the other hand, we may enjoy ourselves with composure and generous neighbor\'s atmosphere in a small town. >> On the other hand, we may enjoy with composure the atmosphere of having generous neighbors in a small town.I only like that.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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