2/26 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for catching up with your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

You gave insightful thoughts on this one. I have to agree with you. Physical look isn\'t all that matters. A persons\' contentment and confidence radiates beauty too! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I don\'t like having cosmetic surgery.

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But, I understand some people need it for their better life physically or mentally.

>>But, I understand that some people need it to feel better physically or mentally.
There are so many cosmetic surgery hospitals and clinics in Korea.

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It is very easy to have cosmetic surgery or some treatment.

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I think the massage shop also one kind of coemetic clinic for beauty.

>>I think massage parlors are also a kind of beauty clinic.
We can realize artificial treatment change our face or skin quickly.

>>We can have artificial treatments to change our face or skin quickly.
If it is BOTOX or artificial filler, the changing time is faster.

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If it is just cosmetics, it is a little bit slow.

>>If it\'s a surgery, it takes time.
Therefore, if we can trust BOTOX or artificial filler is safe to our health, everyone will choose them.

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However, I think the most important thing is self-confidence and self-contentment, whatever you get them from medical power.

>>However, I think the most important thing is self-confidence and self-contentment, which you don\'t get from surgical or medical ways.
So, we should control and take care of our minds.

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