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Many kinds of research budgets are released from the government.
There are many kinds of research projects and the offering period is various in the government.
Some research budgets are offered by the Ministry of Education.
And sometimes it comes from the Ministry of Trade and Industry.
Here, a very important thing is that the purpose and research project which they want to invest are very different according to the ministry.
We have to understand it, and we should write the proposal in the right place with the right contents.
There are so many kinds of researches in the world, and I can not say some research is not important.
All researchers are working with their purpose and all research has its own meaning, even if it looks like not influential right now.
However, only if we have money, we can do research, it\'s true.
So, I think that the most important thing to get the budget is to get officials to perfectly understand why this research required right now.
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Many kinds of research budgets are released from the government.
>> Many kinds of research budgets are released by the government.
There are many kinds of research projects and the offering period is various in the government.
There are many kinds of research projects and the offering period is various in the government.
>> The projects are different and the offers come from various sectors of the government.
Some research budgets are offered by the Ministry of Education. And sometimes it comes from the Ministry of Trade and Industry.
Some research budgets are offered by the Ministry of Education. And sometimes it comes from the Ministry of Trade and Industry.
>> correct
>> Some research budgets are offered by the Ministry of Education and sometimes by the Ministry of Trade and Industry.
Here, a very important thing is that the purpose and research project which they want to invest are very different according to the ministry.
>> The most important thing is that the research project they are investing in should vary and serve the purpose of the sectors that support them.
We have to understand it, and we should write the proposal in the right place with the right contents.
We have to understand it, and we should write the proposal in the right place with the right contents.
>> correct
There are so many kinds of researches in the world, and I can not say some research is not important.
There are so many kinds of researches in the world, and I can not say some research is not important.
>> correct
All researchers are working with their purpose and all research has its own meaning, even if it looks like not influential right now.
All researchers are working with their purpose and all research has its own meaning, even if it looks like not influential right now.
>> All researchers are working with their purpose and all research has its own meaning, even if it seems insignificant for now.
However, only if we have money, we can do research, it\'s true.
However, only if we have money, we can do research, it\'s true.
>> However, it is true that can only do research if we have money.
So, I think that the most important thing to get the budget is to get officials to perfectly understand why this research required right now.
So, I think that the most important thing to get the budget is to get officials to perfectly understand why this research required right now.
>> So, in order to acquire the budget, it is important to make officials perfectly understand why the research is necessary at this time.
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