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학생이 쓴 원문
EDUCATION
Degree / Diploma University / Institute Major G.P.A Location
Graduation Hong-Ik high school academic Seoul
Prospective graduate Kwang Woon University international 4.3/4.5 Seoul
cooperation
Graduation Harbin University of Chinese 3.8/4.5 Harbin
Science and Technology
SKILLS AND OTHER INFORMATIONS
Linguistic skills • Intermediate English communication skills
• Intermediate Chinese communication skills
Computer skills • Good at Microsoft Excel, Word, Power point.
• Good at Premier pro, Photo shop, Indesign.
Others • Have a lot of experience on editing video.
강사 첨삭
Try to fix your educational background Sir. Do not forget to incude your student level such as elementary, middle school, high school and college. Also, include the name of your school, the year attended in the school and the address of the school. Go and revise your resume.
-Teacher Chloe
EDUCATION>>EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND
>>EDUCATIONAL HISTORYDegree / Diploma University / Institute Major G.P.A LocationGraduation Hong-Ik high school academic SeoulProspective graduate Kwang Woon University international 4.3/4.5 Seoulcooperation Graduation Harbin University of Chinese 3.8/4.5 HarbinScience and Technology >>You have to indicate the years when you attended to these universities Sir. >>For example:
BACHELOR OF ARTS IN ENGLISH STUDIESMajor in Communication ArtsHarvard University
United States of AmericaJune 2004 - April 2008
SKILLS AND OTHER INFORMATIONS>>SKILLS AND OTHER INFORMATIONS:Linguistic skills • Intermediate English communication skills
>>Linguistic Skills:
>>Intermediate English communication skills• Intermediate Chinese communication skills
>>Intermediate Chinese communication skillsComputer skills • Good at Microsoft Excel, Word, Power point.>>Computer Skills:
>>Good at Microsoft Excel, Word, Power point.
• Good at Premier pro, Photo shop, Indesign.
>>Good at Premier Pro, Photo Shop and Indesign. Others • Have a lot of experience on editing video.
>>Have a lot of experiences editing videos.
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