2-26th Homework

2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

We are saying the lies during living in the society or in house. It is to cheat someone or to make someone feel good. Anyway, it is deception no matter what is the purpose. Two kind of the lies have a specific intention that is cheat someone. One have an intention to get an advantage or to get some money from someone through the lies. In this case, many people don't know that is a lie. Another also have an intention but it is to make him or her delight when he or she disappointed. In this case, someone knows that it is a lie. But they want to listen to that words even if it is a lie. A downright lie for getting money from someone is a crime. A lier will go to the prison. The question was whether the lie or deception is ever justified. If the deception is acceptable by counterpart, it would be okay. But if not, it would be serious. However, the lie is a lie. If you really don't want to cheat someone to get some money, don't say the lies. Anyway, truth is important most of all.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! To be honest, I had a hard time deciding whether it\'s a good thing to occassionally lie depending on the circumstance at hand. Almost everybody, at one time or another, has lied. In my opinion, people lie for two reasons: First, they don\'t want to get punished for their wrong behavior, and second, they don\'t want to hurt other people\'s feelings. I\'ve thought of all of the times I lied with good intentions and ending up getting caught for it. Lying may seem simple and harmless at first, but just like any addiction, you\'ll soon find yourself trapped and entangled more than you could have ever imagined. I think it\'s so much better to tell the truth in any situation, rather than try to lie your way back to the truth. People lose the people they love or the things they value when they get caught up in a lie. It\'s difficult to always tell the truth because more often than not, truth hurts. Anyhow, that was just my opinion. I hope you have a wonderful day. See you again on Thursday. Take care and God bless! ~Teacher C[이름] (^^,)/ We are saying the lies during living in the society or in house. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: We are saying lies in the society or when we are in our house. It is to cheat someone or to make someone feel good. >> CORRECT! OR >> We do it when we want to cheat on someone or when we want to make someone feel good. Anyway, it is deception no matter what is the purpose. >> CORRECT! OR >> Anyway, it is considered as deception no matter what is the reason. Two kind of the lies have a specific intention that is cheat someone. >> The two kinds of lies have a specific intention and that is to cheat someone. One have an intention to get an advantage or to get some money from someone through the lies. >> One has an intention to get an advantage or to get some money from someone through the lies. In this case, many people don\'t know that is a lie. >> CORRECT! OR >> In this case, many people don\'t know that what they are told is a lie. Another also have an intention but it is to make him or her delight when he or she disappointed. >> Another also has an intention but it is to make someone feel delighted when he or she disappointed. In this case, someone knows that it is a lie. >> CORRECT! OR >> In this situation, someone finds out that it is a lie. But they want to listen to that words even if it is a lie. >> But they want to listen to those words even if it is a lie. A downright lie for getting money from someone is a crime. >> CORRECT! OR >> Telling a lie to get money from others is a crime. A lier will go to the prison. >> CORRECT! OR >> A lier coud get imprisoned/incarcerated. The question was whether the lie or deception is ever justified. >> The question was whether the lie or deception is ever justified or not. If the deception is acceptable by counterpart, it would be okay. >> If the deception is acceptable from its counterpart, it would be okay. But if not, it would be serious. >> CORRECT! OR >> If not, then it is a serious situation. However, the lie is a lie. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, a lie is a lie. If you really don\'t want to cheat someone to get some money, don\'t say the lies. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you really don\'t want to cheat on someone just to get money, then it\'s best not to say a lie. Anyway, truth is important most of all. >> Anyway, the truth is the most important of all.

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