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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good afternoon! It was so late to submit my homework today. I have tons of things to do today.
When you think of peace, what image do you think of? Please describe it.
When I think of peace, I can come up with like soft music, bath and sleeping. It's Friday! I have worked hard all week long. I am a little tired now, but I have some plans with my high school friends after working today. I need to recharge my batteries. I want to start my work more energetic next Monday, so I am going to relax at home this weekend.
Thank you! Have a good weekend!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Get enough rest so you will be energetic again next week.
Have a great weekend!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
It was so late to submit my homework today.
>> I was so late in submitting my homework today.
I have tons of things to do today.
>> Correct.
When you think of peace, what image do you think of? Please describe it.
When I think of peace, I can come up with like soft music, bath and sleeping.
>> When I think of peace, I imagine soft music, taking a bath and sleeping.
It\'s Friday! I have worked hard all week long.
>> Correct.
I am a little tired now, but I have some plans with my high school friends after working today.
>> I am a little tired now, but I have some plans with my high school friends after work today.
I need to recharge my batteries.
>> Correct.
I want to start my work more energetic next Monday, so I am going to relax at home this weekend.
>> Correct.
Thank you! Have a good weekend!
>> Correct.
Thank you for doing your homework. Get enough rest so you will be energetic again next week.
Have a great weekend!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
It was so late to submit my homework today.
>> I was so late in submitting my homework today.
I have tons of things to do today.
>> Correct.
When you think of peace, what image do you think of? Please describe it.
When I think of peace, I can come up with like soft music, bath and sleeping.
>> When I think of peace, I imagine soft music, taking a bath and sleeping.
It\'s Friday! I have worked hard all week long.
>> Correct.
I am a little tired now, but I have some plans with my high school friends after working today.
>> I am a little tired now, but I have some plans with my high school friends after work today.
I need to recharge my batteries.
>> Correct.
I want to start my work more energetic next Monday, so I am going to relax at home this weekend.
>> Correct.
Thank you! Have a good weekend!
>> Correct.
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