2.27 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! A fabulous Tuesday to you1
What's the best thing to keep your skin smooth?
I think that the best thing to keep our skin smooth is wearing good cosmetics. To be frank with you,cosmetics are not my cup of tea,but I always put some lotion on my face after washing. To eat good foods and having happy idea are help to keep our skin smooth,too.
Have porcelain skin forever,Kelly!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your secrets in keeping your skin smooth and flawless.
Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! A fabulous Tuesday to you!>> Correct.What\'s the best thing to keep your skin smooth?I think that the best thing to keep our skin smooth is wearing good cosmetics.
>> I think that the best thing to keep our skin smooth is by using good cosmetic brands.
To be frank with you,cosmetics are not my cup of tea,but I always put some lotion on my face after washing.
>> To be frank with you, cosmetics are not my cup of tea, but I always put some lotion on my face after washing.
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To eat good foods and having happy idea are help to keep our skin smooth,too.>> To eat healthy foods and to have happy thoughts are helpful ways in keeping our skin smooth, too.Have porcelain skin forever,Kelly!
>> Have a porcelain skin forever, Kelly!
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