2.27 homework<Are you afraid of getting older? why?>

2018-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Yes. Sometimes I feel afraid because I\'m not sure whether I did my best and had best choice at the past. When I\'m in trouble under the present, I sometimes regret the past and want to go back that time. But now, I found that it\'s not good thoughts to me. So I considerably strive to do my best at the present rather than regret the past and thinking negative things. *I am sorry to write over the five lines.&#128557;

강사 첨삭

Hi Choi!^^

Thank you for being diligent in doing your homework. Stay positive and focus on your goals. Continue to give your best in everything you do.

~Kelly^^

Yes. Sometimes I feel afraid because I\'m not sure whether I did my best and had best choice at the past.

>> Yes. Sometimes I feel afraid because I\'m not sure whether I did my best and made the best choice in the past.

When I\'m in trouble under the present, I sometimes regret the past and want to go back that time.

>> When I am in trouble, I sometimes regret the things I did in the past and think of going back to that time.

But now, I found that it\'s not good thoughts to me.

>> But, I realized that it\'s not good to think about those things.

So I considerably strive to do my best at the present rather than regret the past and thinking negative things.
>> So now
I considerably strive to do my best rather than regret the past and think about negative things.
*I am sorry to write over the five lines.

>> I am sorry I wrote more than five sentences.

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