2.28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! It is nice Friday and the last day of this month.
I really appreciate for your effort teaching my class. THANK YOU!
Homework
Do social-networking sites such as Facebook,Twitter,Kakao Talk,etc., enhance a [이름] person's social life or serve as a substitute for a real social life?
Yes,I think it enhance a [이름] person's social life.They often communicate through the social-networking sites.Social-networking allows them dreams,hopes, and desires to be communicated each other more quickly and closely.It is very useful for [이름] person to communicate these days.But I seldom do that. Because I am not familiar with that.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Mr. [이름]! HAPPY FRIDAY!!!
Thank you for doing your homework consistently this week. I\'m glad that you are always diligent. That is why you keep on improving inch by inch each day. Keep up the good job!
~KeLLy~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning!
>> CORRECT!!!
It is nice Friday and the last day of this month.
>> It is a nice Friday and the last day of this month.I really appreciate for your effort teaching my class. THANK YOU!>> I really appreciate your effort in teaching me. // CORRECT!!!
HomeworkDo social-networking sites such as Facebook,Twitter,Kakao Talk,etc., enhance a [이름] person\'s social life or serve as a substitute for a real social life?Yes, I think it enhance a [이름] person\'s social life.
>> Yes, I think it enhances a [이름] person\'s social life.
They often communicate through the social-networking sites.
>> CORRECT!!!
>> They often communicate through the different social-networking sites.
Social-networking allows them dreams,hopes, and desires to be communicated each other more quickly and closely.
>> Social-networking allows them to dream and hope. It makes them communicate with each other as often as possible.
It is very useful for [이름] person to communicate these days.
>> It is very useful for [이름] people to communicate these days.
But I seldom do that.
>> CORRECT!!!
Because I am not familiar with that.>> CORRECT!!!Thank you!
>> CORRECT!!!
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