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2018-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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If you were going to get a new car, what kind of car would you get? A luxurious car? A sports car? A hybrid or electric car? If I am going to get a new car, I get a hybrid or electric car. Because These are environmentally friendly car. And It is What I can for hazardous environment to be better.

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If you were going to get a new car, what kind of car would you get? A luxurious car? A sports car? A hybrid or electric car?
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If I am going to get a new car, I get a hybrid or electric car.
>>If I am going to get a new car, I will get a hybrid or an electric car.
Because These are environmentally friendly car.
>>Because these are environmentally friendly cars.
And It is What I can for hazardous environment to be better.
>> And this could be a way for me to help save our hazardous environment to be better.

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