2. 28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I don\'t agree with allowing corporal punishment as a means of discipline. The difference between human and animals is that only human have languages. As we\'re human, we should use languages to persuade other people. Some adults may think because children is like an animal, it\'s no use of talking. But I think it\'s very ridiculous reasoning. Nothing can make violence right. Corporal punishment is violence rather than discipline, I think.
I don\'t agree with allowing corporal punishment as a means of discipline. The difference between human and animals is that only human have languages and feelings. As we\'re human, we should use languages to persuade other people. Some adults may think children are like animals and it is no use of talking. But I believe it\'s a very ridiculous reasoning. Nothing can make violence right, and doing corporal punishment is a violence rather than a form of discipline.
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