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I think that anxiety is very similar to fear.
And when I feel anxious when my self-confidence becomes low.
The range of confidence is very large.
When I think about the expected result that will bo not good or will fail, I feel anxious.
In addition, when I feel lonely, I also feel anxious.
In Korea, a person who has a very weak hearts called \'glass-mental\'.
It means very weak and easy to break.
But, sometimes we can be that mind state.
When I am sick or lost my way, I am in a panic.
Many bad and anxious situations occur to me.
I believe that we need exercise to have a strong mind and spirit.
One of the ways is experiencing many small failures from the new work and accept small bad situations.
Often when I contact new work whenever I didn\'t I think I can do it and it will make me mature.
However, sometimes I am at the moment where I can\'t do anything with big concern or anxiety.
In that case, I will sleep first.
In many cases, I feel much better after enough sleep.
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I think that anxiety is very similar to fear.
>> correct
And when I feel anxious when my self-confidence becomes low.
And when I feel anxious when my self-confidence becomes low.
>> And I feel anxious if my self-confidence decreases.
The range of confidence is very large.
The range of confidence is very large.
>> correct
When I think about the expected result that will bo not good or will fail, I feel anxious.
When I think about the expected result that will bo not good or will fail, I feel anxious.
>> When I think that the expected result is not good or failed, I feel anxious.
In addition, when I feel lonely, I also feel anxious.
In addition, when I feel lonely, I also feel anxious.
>> correct
In Korea, a person who has a very weak heart\'s called \'glass-mental\'.
In Korea, a person who has a very weak heart\'s called \'glass-mental\'.
>> correct
It means very weak and easy to break.
It means very weak and easy to break.
>> correct
But, sometimes we can be that mind state.
But, sometimes we can be that mind state.
>> But sometimes, we can have that mind state.
When I am sick or lost my way, I am in a panic.
When I am sick or lost my way, I am in a panic.
>> correct
Many bad and anxious situations occur to me.
Many bad and anxious situations occur to me.
>> I have encountered many bad and nerve-wracking situations. (wracking can also be spelled racking)
I believe that we need exercise to have a strong mind and spirit.
I believe that we need exercise to have a strong mind and spirit.
>> correct
One of the ways is experiencing many small failures from the new work and accept small bad situations.
One of the ways is experiencing many small failures from the new work and accept small bad situations.
>> correct
>> One way is experiencing many small setbacks from work and accepting unfavorable situations.
Often when I contact new work whenever I didn\'t I think I can do it and it will make me mature.
Often when I contact new work whenever I didn\'t I think I can do it and it will make me mature.
>> Often when I am in a new environment and I feel like I can\'t do it, I change my way of thinking and it makes me more mature.
However, sometimes I am at the moment where I can\'t do anything with big concern or anxiety. In that case, I will sleep first.
However, sometimes I am at the moment where I can\'t do anything with big concern or anxiety. In that case, I will sleep first.
>> However, when I am in a desperate situation in which I can\'t do anything, I sleep first.
In many cases, I feel much better after enough sleep.
In many cases, I feel much better after enough sleep.
>> correct
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