2-28th Homework

I think all is important to transfer information to people. Those are good tools to transmit and to gather a lot of opinion. They have a different trait. The newspaper had been the powerful place, but these days its place is not on the top. It's because the internet have been evolved since it invented. And the radio had got the effective power in the broadcasting. Nowadays, many young people don't listen to it. They always listen to the music through the internet or their mobile phone. The main reason the prevalent medias in the past has been lose their power is the internet. The internet make us approach to information no matter where we are, no matter when we are. This is a revolution in this era. Many other media had played a role as tools for aggregating the opinions and for finding the solutions. Now, the internet has played a role instead of newspapers, megazine, radio. Especially, we use the smartphone everyday. It is a very powerful tool to propagate our opinion.

Hi, [이름]! ^^ Happy Friday! I hope your day is going great. Thank you for promptly doing your homework. I really love reading about your thoughts and opinions. In addition to that, I\'m also happy because your sentences are getting better and better. I agree when you said the media is a very powerful tool whether it is the newspaper, radio, magazine, TV news station or social mediat through the use of Internet. I think the news broadcasted from these media/channel greatly determine which are important in our society and which are not. Many people conform to what they hear from the news. They consider it as their truth without further validation. That\'s how influential the media is. However, we should be careful with the kind of information that we accept. Anyhow, this is my point-of-view in relation to this matter. See you again on Tuesday. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) I think all is important to transfer information to people. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think it is important to transfer information to people. Those are good tools to transmit and to gather a lot of opinion. >> CORRECT! OR >> Those are good means in transmitting and gathering a lot of opinion. They have a different trait. >> CORRECT! OR >> They have a different characteristic. The newspaper had been the powerful place, but these days its place is not on the top. >> The newspaper had been a owerful place, but these days its place is not on the top. It\'s because the internet have been evolved since it invented. >> It\'s because the Internet has evolved ever since it was invented. And the radio had got the effective power in the broadcasting. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The radio has also given/exuded great power in the broadcasting. Nowadays, many young people don\'t listen to it. >> CORRECT! OR >> Nowadays, many young people don\'t bother to tune in to radio stations. They always listen to the music through the internet or their mobile phone. >> CORRECT! OR >> They prefer to listen to music through the Internet or their mobile phone. The main reason the prevalent medias in the past has been lose their power is the internet. >> The main reason the prevalent media in the past has lost their power is because of the Internet. The internet make us approach to information no matter where we are, no matter when we are. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: The internet provides us information no matter where we are, no matter what we do. This is a revolution in this era. >> CORRECT OR >> This made this era revolutionary. Many other media had played a role as tools for aggregating the opinions and for finding the solutions. >> Many other media had played a role as tools for aggregating the opinions of people and for finding the solutions for different problems. Now, the internet has played a role instead of newspapers, megazine, radio. >> Now, the Internet has played that role instead of newspapers, magazine or radio. Especially, we use the smartphone everyday. >> We use the smartphone everyday. It is a very powerful tool to propagate our opinion. >> CORRECT! OR >> It is a very influential tool in propagating our opinions.