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2012-03-01 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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Hi~Janette! Sorry I'm late TOT It's been a long time!How have you been? I really hope you are fine^^ anyway If I imagine my future, My future seems to always be happy. Because I am a mother of two kids. I will be a friendly mother for my kids and I also will be a genial wife for my husband. If I make a familly, I will not work outside. I hope that I work as a tutor in my house. Home visit study is killing two birds with one stone. Because I maintain a close relationship with my kids and I also earn money Is this story so boring? But I don't want to many things like fame, lots of money, expensive car and so on! I will content with trivial happiness

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Hi Miss [이름] .^__^.   I can\'t believe that I am talking with you again. It\'s a very good and soothing feeling. Since the last time I talked to you, I can see that there are some changes in you. I think, you have become a better individual. Whatever endeavors you are undergoing right now, I hope you can get through it. Fighting^^   Aha, speaking of changes, your composition is much much better than the last time. Really, amazing. You were able to give me good vocabulary words and good sentence constructions and pattersn. Keep up doing a great job. Aside from that, I am never bored with your answers. I always look forward to reading your works.^^   Thank you very much for sending me your homework and cheer up. I know you can do it Miss [이름]. God bless you.^^ T. Janette   Hi~Janette! Sorry I\'m late TOT>> Correct!^^ It\'s been a long time!How have you been? I really hope you are fine^^>> Correct!^^ anyway If I imagine my future, My future seems to always be happy.>> Anyway, everytime I imagine my future, it seems like it is always happy. Because I am a mother of two kids.>> Correct!^^ I will be a friendly mother for my kids and I also will be a genial wife for my husband.>> Correct!^^ If I make a familly, I will not work outside.>> Correct!^^ I hope that I work as a tutor in my house.>> I hope that I will work as a tutor in my house. Home visit study is killing two birds with one stone.>> Correct!^^ Because I maintain a close relationship with my kids and I also earn money>> Correct!^^ Is this story so boring? But I don\'t want to many things like fame, lots of money, expensive car and so on!>> Is this story so boring? But I don\'t want many things like fame, lots of money, expensive cars and so on! I will content with trivial happiness >> I will be contented with trivial happiness.  

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