2.3 Homework

2015-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good afternoon! Did you have a nice lunch? What springs to your mind when you hear the world "food safety"? I think that one of the most important of these "food safeties" is its expiration date. We also need to wash vegetables and fruits well before eating them, and we should be ensure its original maker. It would be safer what made by big company than small one. Thank you! See you tomorrow!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for you ideas about food safety. Anyway, I had a good lunch today. How about you? What did you have for lunch? Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon! Did you have a nice lunch?>> Correct.What springs to your mind when you hear the world \"food safety\"?I think that one of the most important of these \"food safeties\" is its expiration date. >> I think that one of the most important things to consider regarding \"food safety\" is the expiration date.  We also need to wash vegetables and fruits well before eating them, and we should be ensure its original maker. >> We also need to wash vegetables and fruits well before eating them, and we should be ensured of good food sources. It would be safer what made by big company than small one.>> It would be safer to buy products manufactured by big companies than small ones.Thank you! See you tomorrow! >> Correct.  

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