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Hello [이름]! I agree with you. This modern era has a lot of development but at the same time, it has a lot of complications. Let us keep up with the changing times!~~T.Dee

When I think \'disease\', I used to mind personal illness such as cancer, diabetes, and leukemia until quite recently.

>>When I think  about the word \'disease\', I used to mind personal illnesses such as cancer, diabetes, and leukemia until quite recently.
But nowadays, I come up the infectious diseases.

>>But nowadays, I think differently because of the infectious diseases.
 Viruses are evolving very rapidly.

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 The influence of them covers the whole world.

>> Their effect covers the whole world.
 I think that sanitation is improving, but the evolving rate of viruses is faster.

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 I talked with my husband that the immunity of the earth became worse.

>> I talked with my husband that the immunity of the earth became worse.
 New diseases are upcoming every year.

>>New diseases are coming up every year.
 High technology of human increase the lifetime of a human.

>> Modern technology developed by humans also increase the life span of humans.
 But, new factors to decrease human life are also increasing, such as fine dust, contagious disease, and environmental pollution.

>>However, the occurrence of new factors which decrease the life span of humans is also increasing, such as fine dust, contagious diseases, and environmental pollution.
Sometimes I think that the earth controls the population itself.

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The anxiety of people is getting serious.

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 People stay at home and refuse to contact others.

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 Many people ignore and blame the right of a man with a disease.

>> Many people ignore the right of a man with a disease or blames him for it.
 However, I also don\'t know what is the perfect method and solution.

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 I hope that we will overcome many diseases in the future.

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