2-32th Homework

Basically, I think that success and happiness are not controlled. If we want to manage or to control these, we would loose the power of control. Controlling it in being many effects is very difficult. And the choice is also difficult. It's because everybody has a greed that is to desire getting something and getting better than others. In front of our, there are many good things to be arisen the greed. If we don't care of these, we would be happy. Of course, it is also our choice. I think that both is the difficult things. Even if we control success and happiness, we would face the greed. When we face it, we could not easily fling the attraction of the greed. If you do that, you are a sage. Generally, we could not fling it. Therefore, we are a normal person. And the thought of controlling success and happiness is absolutely wrong. I think that the best thing to be happy is to remove the greed in mind. Buddha said the origin of the pain is the greed. First of all, get rid of your greed.

Hello, [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering our essay question for today. I am really happy with your sentences and I enjoyed reading your answers. ^^ Good job! :) In my opinion, our happiness depends on our choices and not on the things that we have no control of. It is wrong to blame other people or the circumstance at hand for our unhappiness or discontent. We forge our own path and destiny. If you decide to be happy, nobody or nothing can take that away from you. But if you decide to be miserable, there\'s nobody or nothing that could help you or get you out of that situation. Happiness is a choice. It\'s our choices in life that mostly determine who we really are. If things go wrong because of the choices you\'ve made, the blame should not be given to others. We should learn how to be responsible of our own choices and decisions. That\'s my point-of-view regarding this matter. I hope you\'re having a great day. See you tomorrow. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :) Basically, I think that success and happiness are not controlled. >> CORRECT! OR >> Basically, I think that success and happiness cannot be controlled. If we want to manage or to control these, we would loose the power of control. >> CORRECT! OR >> If we insist on managing these, we would end up losing. Controlling it in being many effects is very difficult. >> [DO YOU MEAN:] Controlling it and its effects are very difficult. And the choice is also difficult. >> CORRECT! OR >> In addition to that, the choice is also difficult. It\'s because everybody has a greed that is to desire getting something and getting better than others. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: It\'s because everybody is greedy and has the desire to get something better than the others. In front of our, there are many good things to be arisen the greed. >> In front of us, there are many good things that could increase our greed. If we don\'t care of these, we would be happy. >> If we don\'t care about these, we would be happy. Of course, it is also our choice. >> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, it is also up to us. I think that both is the difficult things. >> I think both are difficult. Even if we control success and happiness, we would face the greed. >> Even if we control success and happiness, we would face greed. When we face it, we could not easily fling the attraction of the greed. >> When we face it, we could not easily fling the attraction to greed. If you do that, you are a sage. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you are capable of doing that then you are a wise person. Generally, we could not fling it. >> CORRECT! OR >> Generally, it is difficult for us to set it aside. Therefore, we are a normal person. >> CORRECT! OR >> It is part of being a human. And the thought of controlling success and happiness is absolutely wrong. >> CORRECT! OR >> The thought of controlling success and happiness is absolutely wrong. I think that the best thing to be happy is to remove the greed in mind. >> I think that the best way to be happy is to remove the greed in our minds. Buddha said the origin of the pain is the greed. >> Buddha said the origin of pain is greed. First of all, get rid of your greed. >> CORRECT! OR >> The first thing that you have to do is to get rid of your greed.