2-33th Homework

To change people is not easy. Suddenly, if someone want to change his life or his mind, there may be a certain event or a unique experience. Many people intend to keep their habits and their custom. Nobody suddenly changes their's. But somebody changes his or her life style, it would be something there. You should carefully look into him or her. Around me, someone changes his life style, it is not often. In many cases, he may have a health problem. If he heard a serious comment from a doctor, for example, if you smoke continuously, you would die in a year, he would stop it right now. But in another case, when he heard a caution from the doctor, if he didn't feel a pain by smoking, he would not change his smoking habit. It is not same with the previous case but someone desire to do something. For example, I want to get the expensive device but I don't have enough money to buy it. However, if I don't drink everyday, I can save enough money to buy it.Maybe, he will change his drink habit.

Hi, [이름]! ^^ Thank you very much for doing your homework. We won\'t be talking to each other for a long time and I appreciate your diligence. In my opinion, fear is a very strong motivation to do something. Sometimes it\'s good but other times it\'s also bad. It\'s good for some people because they are motivated to do something. It\'s bad for some people because instead of doing something about their problem/situation, their brain shuts down and they refuse to do something about it. Gaining a reward is also another strong motivation. People are motivated to change for the better when they know that at the end of it, they will get something. Anyhow, this is my opinion. I hope you have a great day. I will miss you. See you after your business trip. ^^Good luck and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] :) To change people is not easy. >> CORRECT! OR >> Changing people is not easy. Suddenly, if someone want to change his life or his mind, there may be a certain event or a unique experience. >> If someone suddenly wants to change his life or his mind, there may be a certain event or a unique experience that he has to go through. Many people intend to keep their habits and their custom. >> CORRECT! OR >> Many people tend to keep their habits and their custom. Nobody suddenly changes their\'s. >> Nobody suddenly changes theirs. But somebody changes his or her life style, it would be something there. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But when somebody changes his or her lifestyle, that means something. You should carefully look into him or her. >> CORRECT! OR >> You have carefully study him or her. Around me, someone changes his life style, it is not often. >> Around me, a person who changes his life style, is not so common. In many cases, he may have a health problem. >> CORRECT! OR >> In most cases, the person may have a health problem. If he heard a serious comment from a doctor, for example, if you smoke continuously, you would die in a year, he would stop it right now. >> If he hears a serious comment from a doctor, for example, the doctor tells him that if he smokes continuously, he would die in a year, he would stop it right now/away. But in another case, when he heard a caution from the doctor, if he didn\'t feel a pain by smoking, he would not change his smoking habit. >> But in another case, when he hears a caution from the doctor and didn\'t feel pain because of smoking, he would not change his smoking habit. It is not same with the previous case but someone desire to do something. >> It is not the same with the previous case but one of them desires to do something. For example, I want to get the expensive device but I don\'t have enough money to buy it. >> CORRECT! OR >> For example, I want to have the expensive device but I don\'t have enough cash to purchase it. However, if I don\'t drink everyday, I can save enough money to buy it. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, if I prevent my self from drinking everyday, I can save enough money to buy it. Maybe, he will change his drink habit. >> Maybe, he will change his drinking habit.