2-35th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
To tend to accept the opinions of others is very convenient for normal persons. It's because this is very easy and simple. On a second thought, it is not to accept the opinions of others but it is to combine mind with others. When we discuss about some problem with colleagues, it will conflict with each other in the opinions. I don't think that an opinion of a person is just correct. It's because he is not a god. Therefore, we have to accept other's opinion and we have to properly assemble various opinions. I think that it is to accept the opinions of others. Sometimes, we don't want to describe our own thought to others. Sometimes, they thought that even if I tell my opinions, it would be not accepted, therefore they give up saying something. I think if you want to listen to various opinions, you have to make an environment to easily say anything. If you want to listen on a certain time, you would not listen at all. Absolutely, there are various opinions about something.
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Hi, [이름]! ^^
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Most people have an intense need to be accepted by the society.
I think that\'s the reason why we comply to its norms and are confined to the walls it builds.
We are forced to suppress innovative and creative ideas because we are given the notion that these ideas are radical thoughts that could bring about chaos when in truth it could possibly lead to change.
People are often afraid of change because they are forced to get out of their comfort zones.
Change is the only permanent thing in this world.
Getting out of your comfort zone can be down right scary but sometimes you have to take a leap of faith and trust that everything happens for a greater purpose.
Growth takes place when you are out of your comfort zone.
Change results to a greater cause when you choose to be different and act different because you believe that doing such could help you become a better person. Thank you for this wonderful composition Adella. I enjoyed reading it and enjoyed giving my opinions about it as well.
Have a wonderful day.
Stay safe, take care always and God bless. See you tomorrow! ^^
~Teacher C[이름]~
To tend to accept the opinions of others is very convenient for normal persons.
>> Accepting the opinions of others is very convenient for normal persons.
It\'s because this is very easy and simple.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s because doing this is quite easy and simple.
On a second thought, it is not to accept the opinions of others but it is to combine mind with others.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: On a second thought, most people do this not to accept the opinions of others but to combine their thoughts with others.
When we discuss about some problem with colleagues, it will conflict with each other in the opinions.
>> When we discuss about some problems with our colleagues, we sometimes get into a conflict with each other because of our opinions. don\'t think that an opinion of a person is just correct.
>> Don\'t think that an opinion of a person is just correct.
It\'s because he is not a god.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This is because he is not a god.
Therefore, we have to accept other\'s opinion and we have to properly assemble various opinions.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: Therefore, we have to accept other\'s opinions and we have to properly weigh those various opinions.
I think that it is to accept the opinions of others.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: I think that is the reason why we have to accept the opinions of others.
Sometimes, we don\'t want to describe our own thought to others.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are times when we don\'t want to describe our own thoughts to others.
Sometimes, they thought that even if I tell my opinions, it would be not accepted, therefore they give up saying something.
>> Sometimes, they think that even if they tell their opinions, it would not be accepted, so they give up their right to say something.
I think if you want to listen to various opinions, you have to make an environment to easily say anything.
>> I think if you want to listen to various opinions, you have to make an environment where people could easily say anything.
If you want to listen on a certain time, you would not listen at all.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: If you want to listen on a certain time, you won\'t be able to do it.
Absolutely, there are various opinions about something.
>> There are absolutely various opinions about something.
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