2-37th Homework

2016-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Creativity is always needed in anytime or anywhere. Creativity has played a very important role of developing a human society. On the second thought, the modern civilization is founded on creativity of human. If humans didn't pursue to invent new something or didn't have a desire for new something, we would not have a prosperous civilization. Until this, It's OK. Nowadays, all of us ask to do or make creatively. It's very stressful for me. There are many different kind people. Someone wants to live peacefully, someone wants to do actively. We have a different ability, and there may be an appropriate job or behavior for us. Today, we live in the fastest era ever. All thing is very fast. Therefore, some creativity things didn't lasted for a long time. Someone wants to get more creative things and more exciting things. If we could not make it. we would finally disappear in the market or in the mind of people. Although I don't want to live like that, my circumspect don't let me be alone.

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Hi, [이름]! (^_^) How\'s your day so far? ^^ Creativity is a form of intelligence that is executed in a fun way. It involves the ability to break out of an established pattern in order to look at things in a different way. As Leo Burnett has once said, \"Curiosity about life in all of its aspects, is still the secret of great creative people.\" Creativity is not just about art. Creativity is also about comfort. We are now enjoying all of the benefits of computer today simply because the people who created it decided to be creative and different. Without creativity, we won\'t be enjoying simple things like electricity and all of the marvelous things it does in our appliances. I hope you were inspired to be creative and innovative [이름]. Do not be afraid to be different. You were born to stand out. Always keep that in mind.I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care and God bless! ~Teacher C[이름]~ Creativity is always needed in anytime or anywhere. >> Creativity is always needed anytime or anywhere. Creativity has played a very important role of developing a human society. >> Creativity has played a very important role in developing a human society. On the second thought, the modern civilization is founded on creativity of human. >> CORRECT! OR >> On a second thought, the modern civilization has been founded based on human creativity. If humans didn\'t pursue to invent new something or didn\'t have a desire for new something, we would not have a prosperous civilization. >> If humans didn\'t pursue to invent new things or didn\'t have a desire for new things, we would not have a prosperous civilization. Until this, It\'s OK. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Up until now, it\'s okay.  Nowadays, all of us ask to do or make creatively. >> Nowadays, all of us are asked to do or make someting creatively. It\'s very stressful for me. >> CORRECT! OR >> I find it stressful. There are many different kind people. >> There are many different kinds people. Someone wants to live peacefully, someone wants to do actively. >> Someone wants to live peacefully and someone wants to live actively. We have a different ability, and there may be an appropriate job or behavior for us. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: We all have different abilities and sometimes we might get inappropriate jobs or behaviors. Today, we live in the fastest era ever. >> CORRECT! OR >> We now live in the fastest era ever. All thing is very fast. >> All things are very fast. Therefore, some creativity things didn\'t lasted for a long time. >> Therefore, some creative things didn\'t last for a long time. OR >> As a result, there are some creative things that don\'t last for a long time. Someone wants to get more creative things and more exciting things. >> CORRECT! OR >> There are people who want to have more creative and exciting things. If we could not make it. we would finally disappear in the market or in the mind of people. >> If we do not comply to these people\'s demands, we would finally disappear in the market or in the mind of people. Although I don\'t want to live like that, my circumspect don\'t let me be alone. >> Although I don\'t want to live like that, my circumspect won\'t allow me to be alone.

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