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학생이 쓴 원문
I tried to study for preparing job interview during the last weekend. But I spent last saturday with just staying at home and watching a TV.
I went to a hair shop and dyed my hair to red-violet color. I worried about the color if it is to strong color so that it would look like abnormal. But it looks really good. Under sunshine the red -violet color is revealed not in the office. I am very satisfied with this color.
I studied English during last sunday afternoon. I don't why my pronounciation is not clear and some letter is hard to pronounce.
Maybe I have a trouble of pronouncition?
강사 첨삭
I tried to study for preparing job interview during the last weekend.
>>I tried to prepare for my job interview last weekend.
But I spent last saturday with just staying at home and watching a TV.
>>But I spent the whole Saturday watching the television.
I went to a hair shop and dyed my hair to red-violet color.
>>I went to a saloon andhave my hair dyed with red-violet color.
I worried about the color if it is to strong color so that it would look like abnormal.
>>I was worried about the color. It might be too strong that I will look awkward.
But it looks really good.
>>correct
Under sunshine the red -violet color is revealed not in the office.
>>When sunshine hits my hair, the red-violet color will be revealed but not when I am in shade.
I am very satisfied with this color.
>>correct
I studied English during last sunday afternoon.
>>I studied English yesterday afternoon.
I don't know why my pronounciation is not clear and some letters are hard to pronounce.
>>correct
Maybe I have a trouble of pronouncition?
>>Maybe I have trouble with my pronunciation.
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