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Yes, they do. They has seemed like to think shaping the society as their responsibility. Nowadays, they don't think like that. The news media is also a company that have to make a money. Today, the media's main profits are made from an advertisement. If they don't get a lot of the advertisement from other companies, they could not publish their media. First of all, the first responsibility of the media is to broadcast or to publish a true to readers. But if they are not independent from the money of some companies that want to advertise its contents, the media would be just a pamphlet. However, the bigger the media become, the wider the influence of the media become. At last, the media would confuse their role, for example, they have to shape the society or to lead the opinions. But the media's main role is to send the truth to readers who cannot see the events directly. Nowadays, the media seems like a authority. They don't absolutely apologize to readers even if they make a mistake.

Hi, [이름]! (^_^) Thank you for this composition. I honestly think, it\'s good. The media has its advantages and disadvantages. It is true that the media is an avenue for us to gain daily news and information. It also provides freedom of speech. However, the media could also be used in a bad way. Sometimes, the negative news are more accentuated than the positive ones. The world is already a messed up place as it is. We need positive news a lot more than the negative ones. I hope you have a great day. It\'s already Friday tomorrow. ^^ Take care and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] Yes, they do. >> CORRECT! OR >> I agree that the media dictates what is important and not in our society. They has seemed like to think shaping the society as their responsibility. >> They seem to think that shaping the society is their responsibility. Nowadays, they don\'t think like that. >> CORRECT! OR >> Nowadays, they don\'t think like that anymore. The news media is also a company that have to make a money. >> The news media is also a company that has to make money. Today, the media\'s main profits are made from an advertisement. >> CORRECT! OR >> Most media gain profits today through advertisement. If they don\'t get a lot of the advertisement from other companies, they could not publish their media. >> If they don\'t get a lot of the advertisement from other companies, they could not publish their news/articles. First of all, the first responsibility of the media is to broadcast or to publish a true to readers. >> First of all, the first responsibility of the media is to broadcast or to publish what is true to the readers. But if they are not independent from the money of some companies that want to advertise its contents, the media would be just a pamphlet. >> CORRECT! OR >> However, if they are not independent from the money of some companies that want to advertise its contents, the media would just be a pamphlet. However, the bigger the media become, the wider the influence of the media become. >> However, the bigger the media becomes, the wider the influence of the media also becomes. At last, the media would confuse their role, for example, they have to shape the society or to lead the opinions. >> At last, the media would confuse their role. For example, they have to shape the society or to lead the opinions. But the media\'s main role is to send the truth to readers who cannot see the events directly. >> CORRECT! OR >> But the media\'s main responsibility is to show the truth to the readers who cannot see the events directly. Nowadays, the media seems like a authority. >> Nowadays, the media seems like an authority. They don\'t absolutely apologize to readers even if they make a mistake. >> They don\'t absolutely apologize to the/their readers even if they make a mistake.