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2013-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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Because It's too hard for her to raise the money for both medical bills and the tuition. In addition, James has to live in a share house of homestay near the university. "james, I know it's is not what i have to say to you as your mother. if... what if i can't prepare your tuition? As you know, the money that i'm earning from a sewing factory is too short to live with all family and to pay the hospital expenses." Mother lowered her head like a criminal. she let out a deep sigh woth a long face. Father said nothing.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!   Euphoric Monday!   Thank you so much for your activeness in our class today. I am really happy that you are studying very well. Keep it up. Always be inspired by your dreams. I know that someday you will be a good speaker in English. So be patient and study well. Be joyful always and have faith.   Have a wonderful night ahead and sleep well. Take care always.   ~Teacher Mona        Because It\'s too hard for her to raise the money for both medical bills and the tuition. >> Because she knew that it will be too hard for her to raise the money for both medical bills and for James tuition. In addition, James has to live in a share house of homestay near the university.>> Aside from that, James has to live in a men\'s dormitory near the university.\"james, I know it\'s is not what i have to say to you as your mother. >> \"James, I know it is not what you are expecting for me to say for I am your mother\". if...what if i can\'t prepare your tuition? >> \"What will you do if I can not provide your tuition?\". As you know, the money that i\'m earning from a sewing factory is too short to live with all family and to pay the hospital expenses.\">> \"As you know, the money that I am earning from the sewing factory is not enough to provide the needs of our family and to pay the hospital expenses.\"Mother lowered her head like a criminal.>> His mother lowered her head like a criminal ashamed that she is not capable of sending his son to the university.she let out a deep sigh woth a long face.>> She let out a deep sigh with her sorrowful face.Father said nothing. >> His father said nothing.

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