2-39th Homework

2016-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Of course, there is always another answer or interpretation about the same thing. If not, it would be like to have a problem. Human being has a brain that he or she can consider about something. The purpose of the brain is to think about something. If it stop to think, you have to go a doctor. I suppose that there is an apple on the table. And I will ask a feeling about it to many people. Someone would tell me that the apple's color is red or the apple is very fresh so that I want to eat. Someone would tell me that he is going to plant it to get the more apples from a tree. We can think various answers about the apple. In some cases, they intend not to speak about their's thought or opinion. It's because they have a fear about being criticizing their thought. Or they would give up telling about opinions. However, all of us has a opinion but we don't just tell. Even if a plane is perfect, nothing satisfies all. Finally, we have to take care of the plan even though it was decided to act.

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Hi, [이름]! A great Friday to you! How\'s your day going so far? Thank you for writing in our composition board again. In my opinion, having a fresh point of view in a situation is always helpful especially if you\'ve been dealing with that situation for quite some time. Most of the time, people tend to look at a certain problem up close that\'s why sometimes, they fail to see the whole picture. At times, you have to move away and look at things in another angle and interpret things in a different manner. Open-mindedness is actually the key in this matter. More often than not, it\'s difficult to accept other people\'s point of view. Having this kind of attitude could actually open not only our eyes but our minds to different possibilities and different solutions. I hope you have a great Friday and a wonderful weekend. I\'ll see you again on Tuesday. ~Teacher C[이름] (^^,) Of course, there is always another answer or interpretation about the same thing. >> CORRECT! OR >> Of course, there is always another answer or interpretation for everything. If not, it would be like to have a problem. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: If not, it would be likely to result to a problem. Human being has a brain that he or she can consider about something. >> A human being has a brain that he or she can use to think about something. The purpose of the brain is to think about something. >> CORRECT! OR >> The brain\'s main purpose is for thinking. If it stop to think, you have to go a doctor. >> If it stops to think, you have to go to a doctor. I suppose that there is an apple on the table. And I will ask a feeling about it to many people. Someone would tell me that the apple\'s color is red or the apple is very fresh so that I want to eat. >> I suppose that if there is an apple on the table, and I will ask many people what they think or feel about it, someone would tell me that the apple\'s color is red or the apple is very fresh and would make me want to eat it. Someone would tell me that he is going to plant it to get the more apples from a tree. >> Someone would tell me that he is going to plant it to get more apples from a tree. We can think various answers about the apple. >> We can think of various answers about the apple. In some cases, they intend not to speak about their\'s thought or opinion. >> In some cases, they intend not to speak about their thought or opinion. It\'s because they have a fear about being criticizing their thought. >> It\'s because they have a fear about being criticized for their thought. Or they would give up telling about opinions. >> Sometimes, they would give up their right to tell/say their opinions. However, all of us has a opinion but we don\'t just tell. >> However, all of us has an opinion but we just don\'t tell it. Even if a plane is perfect, nothing satisfies all. >> Even if a plane is perfect, not everyone would be satisfied. Finally, we have to take care of the plan even though it was decided to act. >> CORRECT! OR >> Finally, we have to keep the plan even though the action was already decided.

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