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For a long time, the parenting has been considered as a responsibility of married people. They had to be a parent to survive in the server environment. If they don't have a lot of children, they could not make a money in agriculture ear. Now is not the agriculture ear. We don't need anymore human's physical power like as previous ears. We can substitute a machine from humans to work somethings. I don't know the reason why the parenting more blurred. But the intention of the parenting would be more decreased than previous ear. Many people in this ear don't feel the need for parenting. They can live alone without other's help, for example, their's family. Therefore, the parenting just became a determination for modern people. It is not necessity. To be parent, we have to do many things for kids and we have to sacrifice ours. In the wide view of point, it is very serious problem. If those who don't want to be a parent will increase, the society including them would be disappeared slowly.

Hello, [이름]! ^^Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and sharing your opinion. I agree with you when you said, good parenting is very important in every child\'s life. It has a great impact because the parents are considered as the first teachers of a child. Without good parenting, a child would not fully understand how to be a good and productive person in the society. They wouldn\'t perform well or excel in schools and it would be difficult for them to relate to other people. It\'s sad because getting out of the agricultural era should have improved our skills as parents but they seem to go worse. We\'ve entered the technological era where career is far more valued than starting a family and rearing good children. We should have take advantage of this era and improved our parenting skills but we failed to do so. Thank you for this essay [이름]. I appreciate it very much. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher C[이름] ^^ For a long time, the parenting has been considered as a responsibility of married people. >> For a long time, parenting has been considered as a responsibility of married people. They had to be a parent to survive in the server environment. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: They had to be parents to survive in that environment. If they don\'t have a lot of children, they could not make a money in agriculture ear. >> If they don\'t have a lot of children, they could not make enough money in the agricultural era. Now is not the agriculture ear. >> We are not in the agricultural era anymore. We don\'t need anymore human\'s physical power like as previous ears. >> We don\'t need humans\' physical power/strength like in the previous eras. We can substitute a machine from humans to work somethings. >> We can substitute a machine from humans to work on some things. I don\'t know the reason why the parenting more blurred. >> I don\'t know the reason why the parenting role has become more difficult on the part of the parents. But the intention of the parenting would be more decreased than previous ear. >> DO YOU MEAN]: The quality of parenting has decreased compared to the previous era. Many people in this ear don\'t feel the need for parenting. >> Many people in this era don\'t feel the need for parenting anymore. OR >>  Many people in this era don\'t see the importance of good parenting anymore. They can live alone without other\'s help, for example, their\'s family. >> They can live alone without other\'s help; even from their own family. Therefore, the parenting just became a determination for modern people. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Therefore, parenting has just become a trivial thing for modern people. It is not necessity. >> It is not a necessity. To be parent, we have to do many things for kids and we have to sacrifice ours. >> To be a parent, we have to do many things for our kids and sacrifice some things for them. In the wide view of point, it is very serious problem. >> In a wide point-of-view, it is a very serious problem. If those who don\'t want to be a parent will increase, the society including them would be disappeared slowly. >> If those who don\'t want to be a parent will increase, the society would disappear slowly.