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2018-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi teacher! It's my first time to do homework with your class. I'm sorry, I have no room for doing others. Fortunately, I rested enough during weekend and got a full of energy! Actually I slept about 12 hours per day during weekend! Haha :D Anyway, follows are my homework: Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction? A: I disagree big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. I think job satisfaction is most important when we got a job. Because It can be connected our life satisfaction. We spend most of our time to do work. If job satisfaction was not good, we would be unhappy. Salary is also important. But it can't replace our happiness.

강사 첨삭

 Hi there [이름]!(\",)

I agree with you. High salary isn\'t equivalent to happiness. It matters but in the long run, work will stress you out and eventually kill your enthusiasm to  do your work if you don\'t like what you are doing. So my question is, are YOU satisfied with your job?(\",)

See you in class!(\",)

~T. Lynn  

Hi teacher!

>> correct!
 It\'s my first time to do homework with your class.

>> It\'s my first time to do my homework in your class.
 I\'m sorry, I have no room for doing others.

>> I\'m sorry, I have no room for doing other things.
 Fortunately, I rested enough during weekend and got a full of energy!

>> Fortunately, I had enough rest during the weekend so I got full energy!
 Actually, I slept about 12 hours per day during weekend! Haha :D
>> Actually, I sleep for about 12 hours per day during the weekend!
Anyway, follows are my homework:
>> Anyway, my homework follows:
Q: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction?

A: I disagree big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.

>> I disagree that big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
 I think job satisfaction is most important when we got a job.

>> I think job satisfaction is the most important when we get a job.

Because It can be connected our life satisfaction.

>> Because it can be connected to our life\'s satisfaction.

We spend most of our time to do work.

>> We spend most of our time working.

 If job satisfaction was not good, we would be unhappy.

>> correct!

Salary is also important. But it can\'t replace our happiness.

>> correct!

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