2-41th Homework

There are some kinds point of view about the success. One is the success of a society or a group. The other is the success of a person. In the case of the society's success, the important thing is, "is there a personal success in it?". When we work for the society or the group, we generally devote out strength for successfully establishing out task. But after finishing our task, we could not feel the satisfaction sometimes. I think it's because we limit our interests during working. No one includes in the society or the group. We have to work to live in the society. To live in there, we make money even if it is not our interest. If you want to do your interests, I recommend that you would become a freelancer who can do your own interests with satisfaction and pleasure. However, if not, I would like to suggest you find out delights in your situation. Nothing changes in the world. Also, your interests would be changed. Don't anxious about your situation that you are limited by something.

Hi, [이름]! A beautiful Thursday again to you. ^^ How\'s your day at work? Thank you for giving your thoughts and opinions regarding this matter. I actually enjoyed reading them. You also made good sentences today and I\'m really happy. Good job! I agree when you said most of us don\'t want to be involved in civic actions because we don\'t get much out of it. Most people only participate because of the benefit they could possibly get. And I think it\'s just natural to think that way because most people need to make a living in order to survive. Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. See you again tomorrow. ^^Take care and God bless. ~Teacher C[이름] :) There are some kinds point of view about the success. >> There are some kinds point of view about success. One is the success of a society or a group. >> CORRECT! OR >> One of those would be the success of a society or a group. The other is the success of a person. >> CORRECT! OR >> Another would be the success of a person. In the case of the society\'s success, the important thing is, \"is there a personal success in it?\". >> CORRECT! OR >> In terms of the society\'s success, the most important thing is that its members could gain personal success from/in it. When we work for the society or the group, we generally devote out strength for successfully establishing out task. >> When we work for the society or the group, we generally devote our strength to successfully establish our task. But after finishing our task, we could not feel the satisfaction sometimes. >> CORRECT! OR >> But there are times when we don\'t feel satisfied even if we finish our task. I think it\'s because we limit our interests during working. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think it\'s because we don\'t allow ourselves to be creative. No one includes in the society or the group. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: No one wants to be involved in the society or the group. We have to work to live in the society. >> CORRECT! OR >> We have to work to be able to live harmoniously in the society. To live in there, we make money even if it is not our interest. >> CORRECT! OR >> To survive in there, we need to work and make money even if it is not our interest. If you want to do your interests, I recommend that you would become a freelancer who can do your own interests with satisfaction and pleasure. >> CORRECT! OR >> If you want to do your interests, I suggest that you become a freelancer and do your own interests with satisfaction and pleasure. However, if not, I would like to suggest you find out delights in your situation. >> However, if not, I would like to suggest you find delight in your situation. Nothing changes in the world. >> CORRECT! OR >> The world remains the same. Also, your interests would be changed. >> CORRECT! OR >> In addition to that, your interests would also change. Don\'t anxious about your situation that you are limited by something. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Don\'t be anxious about your situation and think too much that you are limited by something.