2-42th Homework

When you do something, do you ignore the first appearance or not? Many people importantly think about the first feeling when they first see something or someone. It is very important for someone to get more impression about you. Generally, substance is more important than appearance. However, how to know about your substance if they don't an interest about you. If you have a good appearance, it is a powerful weapon to advertise you. After attracting, you have to show them your substance and your ability. I think that appearance and substance are important to appeal your personality. Therefore, it is not a problem whether is more important than other. After attracting someone's sight using your appearance, and then if you show your substance, it would be impressive. Sometimes, people misunderstand the relationship between appearance and substance that apart from each other. However, they have a dense relationship. As I previously said, don't ignore both.

Hi, [이름]! ^^ Your composition today is impressive. I loved reading your sentences. Good job. I agree with you when you said appearance and substance are equally important. Instead of comparing one from the other or separting one from the other, we should understand that both could be used to our advantage. Appearance attracts attention and substance makes everything last. People who compare these two things lack knowledge. That\'s why they have to choose between the two instead of choosing to enhance both. Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day.  See you on Tuesday. Take care always. ^^ ~Teacher C[이름] :)  When you do something, do you ignore the first appearance or not? >> CORRECT! OR >> When you carry out something, do you give importance to the first appearance or not? Many people importantly think about the first feeling when they first see something or someone. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Many people give more importance to the first feeling they get when they first see something or someone. It is very important for someone to get more impression about you. >> CORRECT! OR >> To most people, first impressions are very important. Generally, substance is more important than appearance. >> CORRECT! OR >> Generally, substance is more essential than looks. However, how to know about your substance if they don\'t an interest about you. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: However, how would they look into the substance if they\'re not interested? If you have a good appearance, it is a powerful weapon to advertise you. >> If you have a good appearance, it is a powerful weapon to advertise yourself. After attracting, you have to show them your substance and your ability. >> CORRECT! OR >> After getting their attention, you have to show them your substance and your ability. I think that appearance and substance are important to appeal your personality. >> CORRECT! OR >> I think that appearance and substance are important to make your personality more appealing. Therefore, it is not a problem whether is more important than other. >> Therefore, it is not a problem whether one is more important than the other. After attracting someone\'s sight using your appearance, and then if you show your substance, it would be impressive. >> After attracting someone\'s sight using your appearance and showing your substance, then it would be impressive. Sometimes, people misunderstand the relationship between appearance and substance that apart from each other. >> Sometimes, people misunderstand the relationship between appearance and substance, and separate them from each other. However, they have a dense relationship. >> CORRECT! OR >> The are closely related to each other. As I previously said, don\'t ignore both. >> CORRECT! OR >> Both should be given a special attention.